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Could you do me a favor? I’d love to have your feedback on my writing style in my blog(given as website above). It helps me understand the finer points.
Hopefully
-Arjun
Arjun,
Hey, your writing is excellent.
Be careful of subject/verb agreement:
From your blog:
“But how long can anybody keep challenging their own speed?”
should be
But how long can they keep challenging their own speed or
But how long can s/he keep challenging his or her own speed.
Another suggestion to make text more readable:
Write like you talk.
You don’t say ” I will be at the library”
You do say “I’ll be at the library.” Use contractions to make text more conversational.
Finally, pick up a thesaurus. Some of the words you choose have connotations to an English-speaker that you don’t intend.
Nice job. Good subject matter, too.
All the best,
Paul Lalley
editor@webwordslinger.com
SKYPE: Words, Inc.