
DOES GOOGLE KNOW WHAT YOU GOT?
Web writers write a lot of site text. By the metric ton. Optimized with carefully selected keywords strategically placed throughout the body text, embedded text links – you got it all, right?
Wrong-o. Virtually every page of a website is an opportunity to sell, yet how many times have you seen missed opportunities – and perhaps didn’t recognize that they were opportunities to move the visitor closer to conversion.
Overused Opportunities
Mission statements, core beliefs, and About Us are often navigation options taking site visitors to pages where they expect to read about the company’s great prices or professionalism in the delivery of services, blah, blah, blah. That’s why these pages of a site don’t get a lot of respect among visitors. I don’t care what the company’s core beliefs are. Do you? I just want my Blackberry delivered on time, that’s all.
Yet, this is where site owners and, therefore copywriters working under the direction of site owners, devote a lot of time and energy working up eloquent text aspiring to noble goals that 99% of site visitors will skip because of the blah, blah, blah part.
Product descriptions are, by definition, intended to sell the goods or services so in this case, the missed opportunities take the form of descriptive benefits rather than a list of product specs. In product descriptions, focus on how this makes the read’s life better in some way.
Underused Opportunities
Case you forgot, virtually every page that makes up a web site is a potential sell page, even if the sell is hidden inside informational content on your site blog or simply part of the site design itself. If you sell rubber bands, working the words Rubber Bands into the actual design of the site (in text format) makes it lot easier for search engine bots to index the web site.
Important note: search engine bots are as dumb as a box of hammers.
The Guarantee/Warranty Page
Before you get to the fine print, a short riff on your commitment to client/customer satisfaction goes a long way in getting prospects to actually read all that fine print. Sell your commitment to visitor satisfaction in the most logical place – the warranty page.
The Archives
The archives should be an expanding collection of green content, posted fresh daily if possible, that has lost its SEO value but still has value as a resource and as a sell tool.
The informational content must be just that. Purely informational. (Good rule of thumb – keep sales and informational content separate on any site you work on.) However, if properly constructed, a well-written informational piece provides just enough information to convince the reader that s/he needs to call this lawyer or subscribe to this newsletter.
An expansive archives covering a broad range within the topicality of a site is a kitbag of sell pages that will be used over and over.
The “Contact Us” Page
Now, this one totally confuses me.
How many times have you clicked on the Contact Us tab only to be taken to a page that contains name, address and phone number and that’s it. Talk about a missed opportunity!
The visitor clicked on Contact Us. You’ve almost closed the deal. That’s a motivated prospect and here’s the perfect opportunity to do a little low-level trust building to finalize terms. Talk about your 24-hour call center, U.S.-based tech support – sell something that’s going to push that “almost called” to “did call.”
Use this space to provide all avenues of contact from an easy e-mail form to your Skype user name. But don’t waste this incredibly valuable real estate. The visitor clicked on Contact Us! Just a little push and s/he will.
The Checkout
Every page of the checkout should be a trust builder. This cuts down on the site’s abandoned cart rate so save a little space on each page to highlight some positive aspect of site security, protection of personal data, don’t sell our customers’ names, etc.
BTW, it’s also important o know when to stop selling. If the visitor is in the checkout line, the sale is made so here, your text is reassuring and guides the buyer through the process, providing positive feedback on every page.
There are other missed opps on many web sites: localized site text for local business, Our Management Team (stress experience, judgment, etc.), Customize Your Order and other drill-down pages – each an opportunity to sell.
So, yeah, the home page has to ring and resonate with the reader in less than 10 seconds (a fun challenge) and the mission statement should have a certain starchy quality to it. After all, it’s kind of like the company commandments so they should sound 100% professional.
Think of each page as an opportunity to sell – soft and reassuring or steaming heaps of hype – whatever the style, use it on every page and even in the design of the site itself.
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